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She canceled her cruise on day three… But someone had already moved into her bedroom.

The cruise ship’s WiFi finally connected at 2:47 AM on Tuesday. Susan’s phone buzzed with seventeen missed alerts from First National Bank.

Unauthorized transaction: $4,200. Jewelry store.
Unauthorized transaction: $1,800. Electronics.
Unauthorized transaction: $3,500. Furniture rental.

Susan sat up in her narrow cruise cabin. David knew she was at sea until Friday. These charges were happening in Columbus while she was supposed to be unreachable in the Caribbean.

She called the bank’s fraud line.

Bank Representative: Ma’am, I show your joint account holder made these purchases. David Chen, your husband. Is this unauthorized?

Susan: I’m on a cruise. He knows I’m on a cruise. Why is he spending this much money?

Bank Representative: The purchases show as approved by both account holders. Your signature is on file for the jewelry store transaction.

Susan: That’s impossible. I’m in the middle of the ocean.

She hung up and immediately called the cruise director. By 6 AM, she was on a helicopter to Miami International Airport.

The flight to Columbus gave her three hours to think. David had been different before she left. Quieter. More interested in her exact itinerary than usual.

David: You’re sure you’ll be unreachable until Friday?

Susan: That’s what I paid for. Complete digital detox.

David: No emergency contact?

Susan: You have the ship’s number if someone dies.

Now she understood why he’d asked.

The Uber dropped her at their Westerville house at 4:30 PM. The lawn looked different. The garden gnomes were gone. New solar lights lined the walkway.

Susan unlocked the front door and stepped inside.

The living room had been completely rearranged. The couch faced the opposite wall. The coffee table was new. The family photos on the mantle showed David smiling next to a woman with blonde hair and a bright red dress.

Susan wasn’t in any of the photos.

She walked closer. The blonde woman was wearing Susan’s wedding dress in one picture. The same dress hanging in Susan’s closet upstairs.

Susan: What the hell?

She pulled out her phone and tried to connect to their WiFi. The network name had changed from “ChenFamily2019” to “NewBeginnings2024.”

Footsteps on the stairs.

David appeared in the doorway, wearing a button-down shirt Susan had never seen. Behind him walked the blonde woman from the photos.

David: Susan? You’re supposed to be—

Susan: On a cruise. I know. Funny thing about spending four thousand dollars on jewelry while I’m supposed to be unreachable.

The blonde woman stepped forward.

Melissa: David, you said she wouldn’t be back until—

Susan: Until what? Until you finished moving in?

David: This isn’t what it looks like.

Susan: It looks like you redecorated our house and put another woman in our wedding photos.

She walked to the mantle and picked up the photo of Melissa in her wedding dress.

Susan: Where did you get this dress?

Melissa: From the closet upstairs. David said it was his ex-wife’s.

Susan: Ex-wife? We’re still married.

David: Susan, we need to talk.

Susan: We needed to talk before you started spending our money on your girlfriend.

She pulled out her phone and called First National Bank again.

Susan: This is Susan Chen. Account number 4471. I need to freeze all activity on this account immediately.

David: You can’t do that.

Susan: I can and I did. Twenty minutes ago, from the plane.

David’s face went white.

Susan: Every purchase you made today bounced. The jewelry store, the furniture rental, the electronics. All of it.

Melissa: David, you said the money was cleared.

Susan: What money?

David: I can explain.

Susan: Explain why you forged my signature at a jewelry store?

She showed him her phone screen with the bank alerts.

Susan: They have security footage of someone signing my name. Someone who looks a lot like Melissa.

Melissa: I didn’t know. David said you were divorced. He said the papers were final.

Susan: What papers?

David walked to the kitchen and returned with a manila folder.

David: I filed for divorce three months ago.

Susan: You filed? Without telling me?

David: I had it served to your office. You never responded.

Susan: I never got served.

She opened the folder. The divorce petition was dated three months earlier. The signature at the bottom looked like hers, but the handwriting was slightly off.

Susan: I didn’t sign this.

Melissa: David, you said she signed it. You said she was okay with everything.

Susan: I was never served. I never signed anything. This is forgery.

Her phone rang. Unknown number.

Susan: Hello?

Martinez: Mrs. Chen? This is Attorney Martinez. I’ve been trying to reach you about some documents that were filed in your name.

Susan: What documents?

Martinez: Divorce papers and a property transfer. Someone’s been using your information. I’m actually sitting in your driveway right now.

Susan looked out the window. A man in a gray suit was getting out of a Honda Civic.

Susan: I’ll be right out.

David: Susan, don’t do anything rash.

Susan: Rash? You moved your girlfriend into our house and tried to divorce me without telling me.

She walked outside. Martinez was waiting by his car with a briefcase.

Martinez: Mrs. Chen, I represent First National Bank’s fraud department. We’ve been investigating unusual activity on your accounts.

Susan: What kind of activity?

Martinez: Someone’s been using your identity to open new credit lines. They’ve also filed legal documents claiming you’re deceased.

Susan: Deceased?

Martinez: A death certificate was filed with the county clerk two weeks ago. That’s how the property transfer went through so quickly.

Susan: Property transfer?

Martinez: Your house was transferred to David Chen as sole owner, effective immediately upon your death.

Susan felt her knees go weak.

Susan: But I’m standing right here.

Martinez: Yes, ma’am. That’s why we need to involve the police.

As if on cue, two patrol cars pulled up to the curb. Neighbors started appearing on their porches.

Officer Roberts: Mrs. Chen? We got a call about identity theft and fraud.

Susan: That was fast.

Martinez: I called them from the car. This is a federal case now.

David appeared in the doorway, with Melissa behind him.

Officer Roberts: Mr. Chen, we need to talk.

David: I can explain everything.

Officer Roberts: You can explain at the station. You’re under arrest for identity theft, fraud, and filing a false death certificate.

Melissa: David, what’s happening?

Officer Roberts: Ma’am, are you Melissa Torres?

Melissa: Yes.

Officer Roberts: You’re also under arrest for conspiracy to commit fraud and forgery.

Melissa: I didn’t know. I thought they were divorced.

Officer Roberts: You signed documents claiming to be Susan Chen at three different locations. That’s identity theft.

Susan watched as both David and Melissa were handcuffed and placed in separate patrol cars.

Martinez: Mrs. Chen, we’ll need you to come downtown to sort this out. The good news is we caught it early.

Susan: Early? They declared me dead and moved someone else into my house.

Martinez: But they didn’t have time to drain your accounts or sell the property. You freezing the accounts from the plane saved everything.

Susan: What happens now?

Martinez: We reverse the death certificate, void the property transfer, and prosecute them for fraud. You’ll get your house back officially, though you never really lost it.

Officer Roberts: Mrs. Chen, did you have any idea this was planned?

Susan: He asked a lot of questions about my cruise. When I’d be back, whether I’d be reachable.

Officer Roberts: He was counting on having five days to complete the fraud before you returned.

Susan: The cruise was supposed to be seven days.

Officer Roberts: Lucky you came back early.

As the patrol cars drove away, Susan’s neighbor Lee walked over.

Lee: Susan, we were wondering when you’d get back. That woman’s been living here for a week.

Susan: A week? I’ve only been gone three days.

Lee: She moved in on Sunday. Said she was David’s new wife.

Susan: Did anyone think to call me?

Lee: David said you were in Europe. Said you’d moved out months ago.

Susan: I was on a cruise. I left on Sunday morning.

Lee: That’s when the moving truck showed up. They took out half your furniture.

Susan looked back at her house. Now she understood why the living room looked so different.

Martinez: Mrs. Chen, we’ll need to inventory what’s missing. The moving company will have records.

Susan: How did they think they’d get away with this?

Martinez: People fake deaths for insurance money all the time. Usually they disappear to another country. Your husband’s mistake was staying local and moving his girlfriend in immediately.

Susan: And the forged signatures?

Martinez: Melissa Torres has a record for check fraud. She’s good at copying handwriting, but not good enough to fool forensic analysis.

Officer Roberts: Mrs. Chen, you’ll need to stay somewhere else tonight while we process the scene.

Susan: This is my house.

Officer Roberts: Yes, ma’am, but it’s also a crime scene now. We need to document everything they changed.

Lee: Susan, you can stay with us. Roberts and I have been worried about you for months.

Susan: Worried about what?

Roberts: David told everyone you were having a breakdown. Said you’d moved out and wouldn’t take his calls.

Susan: I’ve been living here the whole time. Until Sunday.

Roberts: We know that now. But he had us convinced you’d left him.

Martinez: Classic abuser pattern. Isolate the victim, control the narrative.

Susan: I never thought David was abusive.

Martinez: Financial abuse is still abuse. He was planning to steal your entire life.

Three hours later, Susan sat in Lee’s kitchen, watching the news report on her phone.

News Reporter: A Columbus man and his girlfriend are facing federal fraud charges tonight after attempting to fake his wife’s death and steal her property. David Chen, 45, and Melissa Torres, 32, were arrested after Chen’s wife returned early from a cruise to find Torres living in her house.

Susan: They’re calling it the “Cruise Ship Scam.”

Lee: How are you holding up?

Susan: I keep thinking about all the things I missed. The questions he asked, the way he acted before I left.

Roberts: You couldn’t have known.

Susan: He asked me three times if I’d be completely unreachable. I thought he was being caring.

Her phone buzzed with a text from Martinez.

Martinez: Good news. Moving company found your furniture in a storage unit. Torres paid for a month, planning to sell it online. Everything’s recoverable.

Susan: They were going to sell my furniture.

Lee: What kind of person does that?

Susan: Someone who thought I’d never come back to claim it.

Roberts: What made you come back early?

Susan: The bank alerts. If I hadn’t set up those notifications, I’d still be on the ship.

Lee: And they’d have had four more days.

Susan: Four more days to empty my accounts, sell my stuff, and disappear.

Her phone rang. Martinez again.

Susan: Hello?

Martinez: Mrs. Chen, I have an update. Melissa Torres has agreed to cooperate in exchange for a reduced sentence.

Susan: What does that mean?

Martinez: She’s admitting that David planned the entire scheme. She thought she was helping him divorce his estranged wife, but the evidence shows he knew exactly what he was doing.

Susan: Evidence?

Martinez: Text messages between them going back six months. David was planning this long before you booked the cruise.

Susan: Six months?

Martinez: He was waiting for you to take a trip where you’d be unreachable. When you booked the cruise, he saw his opportunity.

Susan: So this wasn’t spontaneous.

Martinez: Not at all. He researched how to file false death certificates. He had Torres practice your signature for weeks.

Susan felt sick.

Susan: I planned that cruise to surprise him. I thought we needed time apart to reconnect.

Lee: Susan, this isn’t your fault.

Susan: I paid for my own kidnapping.

Roberts: You paid for a vacation. He chose to commit fraud.

Martinez: Mrs. Chen, there’s something else. David had life insurance policies on you worth $200,000.

Susan: Life insurance?

Martinez: He took them out three months ago, right around the time he filed the fake divorce papers.

Susan: He was planning to kill me?

Martinez: Not necessarily. But he was planning to profit from your death, real or fake.

Susan: What happens next?

Martinez: David’s looking at 10-15 years for fraud, identity theft, and filing false documents. Torres will probably get 3-5 years.

Susan: And I get my life back?

Martinez: You get your life back.

Officer Roberts: Mrs. Chen, we’ve finished processing your house. You can go home now.

Susan: Home. That’s going to feel strange.

Lee: Want us to come with you?

Susan: Yes. I don’t want to walk in there alone.

They drove the two blocks back to Susan’s house. The police tape was gone, but the solar lights David had installed were still blinking in the driveway.

Susan unlocked the door and stepped inside. The living room looked exactly as it had that afternoon, but somehow different. Like a stage set that had been abandoned mid-performance.

Susan: They took down all my photos.

Roberts: Where did they put them?

Susan: Probably in the trash.

She walked to the kitchen trash can. It was empty.

Lee: Check the garage.

In the garage, Susan found three boxes labeled “OLD WIFE STUFF” in David’s handwriting.

Susan: Old wife stuff. That’s what my life was to him.

She opened the first box. Her wedding photos, family pictures, college diplomas, and awards from work.

Roberts: He was erasing you.

Susan: Systematically.

The second box contained her clothes, jewelry, and personal items. The third box held documents: her passport, birth certificate, and social security card.

Susan: He kept my identity documents.

Lee: Probably needed them for the fraud.

Susan: Or to make sure I couldn’t prove who I was if I came back.

Martinez appeared in the garage doorway.

Martinez: Mrs. Chen, how are you doing?

Susan: Finding out my husband tried to erase my existence. So, not great.

Martinez: I have some final paperwork for you. The death certificate has been officially voided, the property transfer has been reversed, and your accounts are unfrozen.

Susan: Just like that?

Martinez: The paper trail made it easy. David wasn’t very good at covering his tracks.

Susan: What about Melissa?

Martinez: She’s being processed. Turns out she’s done this before, in Michigan and Indiana.

Susan: She’s a professional.

Martinez: Professional fraud, yes. She targets men going through divorces, helps them hide assets and steal from their wives.

Susan: How many other women?

Martinez: At least four that we know of. You’re lucky you came back when you did.

Susan: Lucky. Right.

Lee: Susan, what will you do now?

Susan: I honestly don’t know. Go back to work, I guess. Try to figure out how I missed all the signs.

Roberts: There weren’t signs to miss. He planned this carefully.

Susan: There had to be something.

Martinez: Mrs. Chen, can I give you some advice?

Susan: Sure.

Martinez: Don’t blame yourself for trusting your husband. Blame him for betraying that trust.

Susan: It’s hard not to feel stupid.

Martinez: You’re not stupid. You’re a victim of a sophisticated fraud scheme.

Susan: Sophisticated?

Martinez: David researched this for months. He knew exactly which documents to file and when. This wasn’t amateur hour.

Susan: I still can’t believe he thought he’d get away with it.

Martinez: He probably would have, if you hadn’t set up those bank alerts.

Susan: My financial advisor insisted on them. I thought they were annoying.

Martinez: They saved your life savings.

Susan: And my actual life, apparently.

Roberts: Mrs. Chen, do you need anything else tonight?

Susan: Just some time to process this.

Lee: We’re right down the street if you need anything.

After everyone left, Susan sat in her living room, surrounded by the furniture David and Melissa had rearranged. She picked up the photo of Melissa in her wedding dress.

The woman looked happy. Genuinely happy.

Susan wondered if Melissa had really believed David was divorced, or if that was just another lie in a scheme full of lies.

Her phone buzzed with a text from her sister in California.

Sister: Saw the news. Are you okay?

Susan: I’m alive, which is apparently more than David expected.

Sister: Do you want me to fly out?

Susan: Not yet. I need to figure out what normal looks like first.

Sister: Normal is overrated. Focus on safe.

Susan: Safe. I can do safe.

She walked upstairs to her bedroom. David’s clothes were gone from the closet, but Melissa’s were still hanging there. Designer dresses, expensive shoes, jewelry boxes.

Susan opened one of the jewelry boxes. Inside was the $4,200 necklace David had bought with their joint account.

The receipt was still in the box. It was made out to “Mrs. David Chen” and signed in Susan’s handwriting.

Melissa had been practicing her signature on jewelry receipts.

Susan’s phone rang. Unknown number.

Susan: Hello?

Woman’s Voice: Is this Susan Chen?

Susan: Yes.

Woman’s Voice: My name is Patricia Williams. I saw your story on the news. The same thing happened to me in Michigan.

Susan: With Melissa Torres?

Patricia: And a man named Robert. They declared me dead and moved into my house while I was visiting my sister in Florida.

Susan: How did you find out?

Patricia: My neighbor called to ask why strangers were living in my house.

Susan: What happened to them?

Patricia: Robert got five years. Melissa disappeared before trial.

Susan: She’s been doing this for years.

Patricia: At least three years that I know of. There’s a whole network of women she’s victimized.

Susan: A network?

Patricia: I can put you in touch with them. It helps to talk to people who understand.

Susan: I’d like that.

Patricia: Susan, can I ask you something?

Susan: Sure.

Patricia: How are you handling the trust issues?

Susan: What do you mean?

Patricia: After someone you love tries to erase you, it’s hard to trust anyone again.

Susan: I hadn’t thought about that yet.

Patricia: You will. And when you do, call me.

After Patricia hung up, Susan walked back downstairs and looked around her living room. Everything was exactly where she’d left it Sunday morning, but nothing felt the same.

David had lived in this house for eight years. He’d eaten breakfast at this table, slept in their bed, watched TV on this couch. And the whole time, he was planning to steal her life.

Susan picked up the remote and turned on the news. Her story was the lead segment.

News Reporter: The so-called “Cruise Ship Scam” has exposed a nationwide fraud ring targeting married women. Melissa Torres, who was arrested today in Columbus, is wanted in connection with similar schemes in Michigan, Indiana, and Florida.

The screen showed David’s booking photo, then Melissa’s.

News Reporter: David Chen faces federal charges that could result in 15 years in prison. Torres, who has used multiple aliases, could face up to 20 years if convicted on all counts.

Susan turned off the TV. She didn’t need to watch her nightmare become entertainment for strangers.

Her phone buzzed with a text from Martinez.

Martinez: Thought you should know – Torres just confessed to four other similar schemes. You helped us catch a serial fraudster.

Susan: I just came home early from a cruise.

Martinez: And saved four other women from going through what you went through.

Susan: How?

Martinez: Torres had a list of targets. All married women with planned vacations in the next six months.

Susan: She was going to do this to four more people?

Martinez: Your case broke the whole ring open.

Susan: I don’t feel like a hero.

Martinez: You don’t have to. You just have to be okay.

Susan: I’m working on it.

She walked to the kitchen and opened the refrigerator. It was full of food she didn’t recognize. Expensive cheese, imported beer, organic vegetables.

David had been shopping for Melissa’s tastes, not hers.

Susan threw it all away and ordered pizza.

While she waited for delivery, she called her bank.

Susan: This is Susan Chen. I need to change all my account numbers and passwords.

Bank Representative: Of course, Mrs. Chen. Given the fraud case, we can expedite new cards and checks.

Susan: Thank you.

Bank Representative: Ma’am, can I ask you something?

Susan: Sure.

Bank Representative: How did you know to freeze the accounts so quickly?

Susan: The alerts woke me up at 2 AM. Something felt wrong about David spending that much money while I was supposed to be unreachable.

Bank Representative: Most people would have assumed their spouse had an emergency.

Susan: I guess I’m more paranoid than most people.

Bank Representative: In this case, paranoid saved your financial life.

Susan: And probably my actual life.

Bank Representative: Your new cards will arrive tomorrow. Is there anything else?

Susan: Can you tell me exactly how much they tried to steal?

Bank Representative: Including the attempted property transfer and the insurance policies, approximately $340,000.

Susan: They were going to steal $340,000?

Bank Representative: If the death certificate hadn’t been flagged, they would have succeeded.

Susan: What flagged it?

Bank Representative: You used your credit card at Miami International Airport three hours after you were declared dead. The system caught the discrepancy.

Susan: So buying a sandwich at the airport saved my life.

Bank Representative: Essentially, yes.

After the bank call, Susan sat at her kitchen table and made a list of everything she needed to do: change locks, get new credit cards, find a therapist, probably find a lawyer for the divorce she actually wanted now.

The pizza arrived at 9 PM. The delivery driver looked nervous.

Delivery Driver: Are you the lady from the news?

Susan: Yes.

Delivery Driver: That’s crazy what happened to you.

Susan: It’s been a long day.

Delivery Driver: My wife saw the story. She said she’s going to set up those bank alerts like you had.

Susan: That’s smart.

Delivery Driver: How did you know to come home early?

Susan: I didn’t know anything. I just knew something was wrong.

Delivery Driver: Well, you’re famous now.

Susan: I don’t want to be famous.

Delivery Driver: Too late for that.

After he left, Susan ate pizza in her living room and thought about what the delivery driver had said. She was going to be “the cruise ship lady” for the rest of her life.

Her phone rang. Her boss.

Boss: Susan, I saw the news. Take as much time as you need.

Susan: I’ll be back Monday.

Boss: Are you sure? This is traumatic.

Susan: Work is normal. I need normal right now.

Boss: If you change your mind, just call.

Susan: Thanks.

Boss: Susan, can I ask you something personal?

Susan: Sure.

Boss: Did you have any idea David was capable of this?

Susan: None. He seemed like the most honest person I knew.

Boss: That’s terrifying.

Susan: Tell me about it.

After her boss hung up, Susan realized she was exhausted. It was only 10 PM, but it felt like the longest day of her life.

She walked upstairs to her bedroom. Melissa’s clothes were still hanging in the closet. Tomorrow she’d bag them up for the police, but tonight she just wanted to sleep in her own bed.

Susan changed into pajamas and brushed her teeth. In the bathroom mirror, she looked exactly the same as she had Sunday morning when she left for the cruise.

But everything else had changed.

Her phone buzzed with one last text. Patricia Williams, the woman from Michigan.

Patricia: Susan, I know you’re probably overwhelmed, but I wanted you to know – it gets easier. Not normal, but easier.

Susan: How long did it take?

Patricia: About a year to feel safe again. Two years to trust anyone new.

Susan: That’s a long time.

Patricia: But you do get through it. And you’re stronger afterward.

Susan: I don’t feel strong.

Patricia: You came home early from a cruise because something felt wrong. You trusted your instincts and saved yourself. That’s strength.

Susan: I guess.

Patricia: Get some sleep. Tomorrow will be better.

Susan: How do you know?

Patricia: Because you’re alive, you’re safe, and the bad guys are in jail. Everything else is just details.

Susan turned off her phone and got into bed. The sheets smelled like her detergent, not like strangers.

For the first time in 18 hours, she felt like she was home.

Outside, she could hear her neighbors talking on their porches, probably still discussing the day’s drama. But inside, everything was quiet.

Susan closed her eyes and tried to imagine what her life would look like six months from now. Different, certainly. But maybe, eventually, better.

She was 43 years old, financially stable, and apparently famous for surviving something most people couldn’t imagine.

It wasn’t the life she’d planned, but it was her life.

And for the first time in years, it was completely hers.

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This work is a work of fiction provided “as is.” The author assumes no responsibility for errors, omissions, or contrary interpretations of the subject matter. Any views or opinions expressed by the characters are solely their own and do not represent those of the author.